I lose my hair because I have too much stress

(I think I'm getting stress.) I'm losing my hair these days.
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I'm losing my hair these days, because I'm getting stress.

My hair is falling out these days, I think I am stressed out.

I think that I am losing my hair these days because I get a lot of stress.

i lose my hair I think I'm getting stress

my hair is falling out these days because of lots of stress

I think I got strees out. My hair is falling out these days.

I lose my hair because I have too much stress

I'm losing my hair because of stress.

My hair is thinning because I got stressed out.

I did safety patrol and I will patrol every Tuesday

I did safety patrol today. Safe patrol will continue on every Tuesdays.

I got three for the price of one.

I got three with the price for one.

I got three with the price of one.

I got three with the price of one.

I bought three for the price of one.

The bargaining makes war of nerves and I am very tired and inconvience so I don't like bargaining

Bargaining is a war of nerves. It always makes me feel uncomfortable and I don't like it.

Bargaining is full of nerves. It always makes me feel unrelaxed so I don't like it.

It is so good that My friend become father

I think it's so cool that my friend is becoming a father.
be동사를 빼먹으면 안되죠^^ 그리고 being 보다는 becoming 이 더 자연스럽지 않을까요?

I think it is cool that my friend becom a father.

I think it's so cool that my friend becomes a father.

One of my friends thinks that being a father is cool.